Sunday, September 4, 2011

Impression




We had been together
As birds of a flock
We had been close
As board to a chalk
We had shared
As friends in deed
We had been complete
As the hours on a clock
We had been us

For a while i stood still
Flashes of you moving
All over around me
Could i still say that
What was left of you
Was just an impression?

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8 comments:

Anonymous said...

not an impression only something more than that.

Salem Lorot said...

Great to find your blog. Impressive work here. I will be visiting regularly.

Bubblyemotions said...

@Salem Lorot Thanks...

Lingering Thoughts said...

A beautiful composition indeed.

Really liked it

jnana said...

Great thought madamji...should i say it is an attachment.....hahaha

Bubblyemotions said...

jnana ji
thanks for d helluva of comments.....phew!
haha....
can c ur deep insight into d world of my poetry....:-)

Anonymous said...

just keep on writing something....

Bubblyemotions said...

i will surely...

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